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Friday, March 21, 2014

Some people say success can be achieved through hard work and determination, others argue it is reached by using money and personal appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say success can be achieved through hard work and determination, others argue it is reached by using money and personal appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Ielts Essay on Success and Appearance 


Today, success is considered ultimate objective of human existence, as it helps people to boost their image in the community. Many experts have been trying to find ways to achieve and define this elusive word. Some have reached a conclusion that hard labor and resolve pave way to success, but there are some, who firmly advocate financial status and presentable personality as being the main elements of secret to success.

People vouching for hard work as being a key to success, feel that only labor and relentless pursuit of objectives can guarantee victory. The hard work coupled with hard resolve has always guided humans through ages and they have excelled even in the face of mass criticism for e.g. when Galileo had discovered the secrets of the solar system, he was termed as an anti Christ, but he continued putting his efforts with great enthusiasm. He was finally able to convince and enlighten the society on this issue.

Besides this, the people who profess hard labor as only way to success, feel those carrying on with their never die attitude are able to confirm their way to the top on long term basis, because on their way to progress they gather enough expertise to face the challenges that may be posed in future. This, in turn, guarantees unparalleled success.

On the other hand, some people feel that success is cannot be achieved by those who do not have money and who cannot afford to look presentable. Today, in the material world, remaining approachable and being in limelight spells success, and these factors can only be guaranteed, if people have money in their pockets and can afford to spend on clothing and improving their appearance.


In conclusion, I feel nothing can supersede hard work and dedication. 

While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

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